Can u please send me the script on my mail? i love the scenes:) nice script;)

George,

Visit http://www.simplyscripts.com/tv.html and read the script (courtesy of Earl hisself) of “Sins of the Mother”.

Did you really need to make a movie about a computer animattion program? Intro graphics good pacing,(done by someone else I suppose) but, are you trying to make a political statement, or sell the computer animation program? Why do you show it twice and why is it so slow, especially when it is just two cells?  The intro credits are deadly slow too.  Whoever your friend is who is doing the graphics, I guess Joseph I. Fagan, is going to keep you all in the bush league.  Get a professional who cares about the final cut, not their part.  You need to reedit this one or Fagan’s dull work will be the anchor that weisghs you down.  There is no room in the big time for people who let the mediocre weigh them down.  I imagine he has a big ego.  And the director needs the stones to cut and edit.  Too bad.  The rest of it was good.  Good sound.

With this episode you have a nice stride going. What I thought was going to be a Gattaca like story was more than I expected it to be. A mindless system with no room for observation of rules is quite scary. I was so cheering for the doc for doing the right thing that I was taken by surprise by how it all ended. The patient’s explanation at the begining sounded so natural as if she was speakign to a friend. Very nice payoff.

I really enjoyed this one. Good acting, professional filming nice pacing on a good to the point of being true, story. 2 nits? Repetition of the diagnostic program (slowed it down- even if a cool graphic scene) and her kissing him at the end (made it a fictional unrealistic story). Its already kind of true in medicine as rules do already trump people’s pain, people’s lives.